I had a quibble with only one sentence in the whole piece: "The Mormon scriptures are jarringly recent and, in many cases, patently wrong. DNA testing, for example, has shown that the first Americans arrived from Asia, not from the Middle East." We certainly don't claim the Nephites were the first or only ancient Americans.
Anyway, this seems like a fantastic environment in which to launch my novel in 1-2 months. It's all about Mormon sex, plurality of partners, and other provocative things.